Saturday, February 4, 2017

After Being Killed Comments

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My enemy when we shall kill each other in a fight,
in the name of our Gods,
I would like to see my God,
and your God as well.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Chuy Amante 11 February 2017

I say we all share popcorn and let the god's fight

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Hans Vr 11 February 2017

Superb, superb, superb! I get excited reading this poem. The last few weeks I have been immersed in Trumpism and here I read the perfect answer to it. A wonderful poem !

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Kelly Kurt 06 February 2017

An insightful and thoughtful poem. (One more until # 1000!)

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Valsa George 06 February 2017

In the name of God and religion, how many wars are fought and how many lives are extinguished.! But finally when we reach the other kingdom, we realize our God and others' God are one and the same and that we humans are the children of the same Father! Very insightful with a lofty message! A sure 10

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Rajnish Manga 05 February 2017

A powerful commentary on the futility of wars in the name of gods. But the worst thing is that the realisation comes too late. Thanks.

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Khalid Saifullah 05 February 2017

A thought provoking poem, lovely presentation..........................................

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Muhammad Ali 04 February 2017

God is one, and humanity has no types.., also one. very sensitive and lovely poem

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