Jean Mallette
Mobile, Alabama
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After The Battle

Rating: 4.9
Alas! , the raging battle's done
And morning once again has come
As stillness swathes the bleak horizon o'er
The place where echoes come to strum
Upon the still and silent drum
Heard in the battle just the day before.

Across the scarred and battered fists
Of distant mountains, lies a mist-
A thick, gray cloak of vapor presses still;
Like Death, it rules all Life desist
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Nathaniel Booker 01 September 2008
Very unique and rhythmic style of writing you have as it holds all readers until the last melodic flutter. Be Well N8
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Keith Foley 01 September 2008
Nicely said (if anything can be said nicley about a battle/war) . Liked it over all very much. Felt carried away at times. nice tallent. keep sharring. Keith
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Greenwolfe 1962 30 August 2008
I gave it a nine because there were things here and there that were not always the best, but overall I thought this was a piece worth reading more than once. That's all it takes. GW62
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A sad poem...Oh, how I hate war...
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John Nightingale 30 August 2008
A sombre piece. Good work.
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Kris Smith 30 August 2008
Yes very well written excellent content and well penned Chris 10 thanks
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Danny Reynolds 30 August 2008
I don't know why, but there seems to a Scottishness to this piece. (That is a compliment.) Danny
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Ron Flowers 29 August 2008
This is very good poetry. It gets a 10 from me. Ron
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Great! keep it coming!
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