Afterlife Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Afterlife

Rating: 4.8


Flickering lights
sleepless nights
thoughts of another life
come into your mind

Strange noises
strange voices
is that them...
The afterlife

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 16 August 2012

superb

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Sunny Chopra 15 June 2012

Hi Dave - A write that gets you to ponder. I like the intrigue aspect. Cheers! !

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C S 17 May 2012

I wrote a poem on the same topic, ended up like an essay, you are very good with words, saying so much with so few

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Vincent Kuo 10 May 2012

Sounds like insomnia?

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Heather Wilson 30 April 2012

The yet unknown, it could well be, great thought in that poem.

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DJ Barclay 12 March 2019

I love your poem. It was actually the first poem i chose for my school project.

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Rajnish Manga 12 January 2017

Lovely poem that gives us a hint of what we think of our afterlife. Thanks, Alan Walker. You have a wonderful style of saying things.

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Heather Wilkins 06 September 2013

the unknown who is to say. keeps one thinking

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Ameya Deshpande 11 November 2012

in few words it says a lot, I find it funny & interesting, nice!

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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 29 October 2012

Thanks for reading my poem... Short and sweet, this poem conveys a thought that men tend to forget. Awesome! :)

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