poet Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

Afterlife

Flickering lights
sleepless nights
thoughts of another life
come into your mind

Strange noises
strange voices
is that them...
The afterlife

Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 28, 2012
Poem Edited: Saturday, April 28, 2012

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  • DJ Barclay (3/12/2019 6:23:00 PM)

    I love your poem. It was actually the first poem i chose for my school project.

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (1/12/2017 11:38:00 PM)

    Lovely poem that gives us a hint of what we think of our afterlife. Thanks, Alan Walker. You have a wonderful style of saying things.

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  • Heather WilkinsHeather Wilkins (9/6/2013 9:50:00 PM)

    the unknown who is to say. keeps one thinking

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  • Ameya DeshpandeAmeya Deshpande (11/11/2012 4:43:00 AM)

    in few words it says a lot, I find it funny & interesting, nice!

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  • Raihana Abdul JabbarRaihana Abdul Jabbar (10/29/2012 7:29:00 AM)

    Thanks for reading my poem...
    Short and sweet, this poem conveys a thought that men tend to forget. Awesome!
    :)

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (8/16/2012 1:18:00 AM)

    superb

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  • Sunny ChopraSunny Chopra (6/15/2012 11:33:00 PM)

    Hi Dave - A write that gets you to ponder. I like the intrigue aspect. Cheers! !

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  • C S (5/17/2012 7:00:00 PM)

    I wrote a poem on the same topic, ended up like an essay, you are very good with words, saying so much with so few

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  • Vincent KuoVincent Kuo (5/10/2012 8:43:00 AM)

    Sounds like insomnia?

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  • Heather WilsonHeather Wilson (4/30/2012 1:30:00 AM)

    The yet unknown, it could well be, great thought in that poem.

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  • Valerie DohrenValerie Dohren (4/29/2012 5:13:00 PM)

    Interesting - food for thought.

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  • Katy Lue (4/29/2012 8:56:00 AM)

    I really like this, it leaves me thinking. Great Poem!

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  • Sunny ChopraSunny Chopra (4/29/2012 3:24:00 AM)

    Very nice write indeed! ! Cheers!

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  • Eric Cockrell (4/28/2012 10:12:00 AM)

    perhaps we are there now! thought provoking!

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  • Smoky HossSmoky Hoss (4/28/2012 9:27:00 AM)

    Dave, you must have been reading my dreams of late! I have not been sleeping well for some time, mostly due to some amazing and strange dreams that have been visiting me. And the words you have here written sure hit it exactly correct. I wonder the same thing. Great write.

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (4/28/2012 4:14:00 AM)

    It's like a blind try to imagine a colorful landscape, people will only say how it looks by word, a pleasant feeling maybe bud...For this matter we are really blind we read the descriptions in Holy Book but the thing will never seen until we are there soon...get ready for the unimaginable scene] Do we ready? _Unwritten Soul

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