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Running Wolf

Rating: 4.5

In my dream
I dream I am you
running wolf

As you run through
the valleys of truth
I see the dew
I see the trees
as though I am you
I see through your eyes

I feel your fears
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Daniel Brick 20 March 2015

This is a wonderful poem! It runs with power and truth, it expands the heart to embrace both that power and that truth. It's with humility that I acknowledge you are writing about my American society, or more precisely the indigenous part of it which is Indian, and not white. I have a great belief in the life of the land, that the ground we stand on or run over, is alive, and feeds us with its energy. You have given voice to this belief. And it may just be the redeeming force that will save us from the bleak reality you reveal in your other poem.

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Rahman Henry 06 September 2015

'Because my light and soul I am the reincarnation of you'... wow! how beautifully you compose the wonderful thought. I love it, dear poet.

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Destiny Best 06 December 2011

Touching, spiritually full of understanding.

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Ma Xiaokang 05 March 2015

Because my light and soul I am the reincarnation of you nice one! thanks for sharing . learn from you!

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Kim Barney 15 January 2015

This is very nice poem, Dave, but I have to agree with what Leslie Philibert said. You should capitalize the proper nouns Running Wolf and Indians. Well written.

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sam :) 03 March 2020

good poem i run track and my teacher told me to find a poem on how we feel about running so thanksss :)))

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Sarah Shahzad 23 December 2019

Wonderful, it is an amazing piece of poetry!

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Julia Luber 15 June 2019

Brings me to a different place in my mind.

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Milkyboy Galia 27 October 2018

Wow! just amazing sir.

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Hossein Hajiagha 25 November 2015

very dancing and beautiful

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