Dislocated Heart

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``again - Poem by Dislocated Heart

I draw the line now,
Upon this pavement,
I kneel..

The stars can align..
and form the most beautiful formation known to mankind..
but it can't help me now..

Tossed under the rubble,
last hindering thought,
'Fool'

Paint the rainbow black..
Hide the sunshine,
Make the rain pour..
It's all I ask for..

Our breathes fog up the mirror..
I look at you once more..
Fool.. I say...
Her beauty killed me the instant she kissed me..
From the start I knew this unstable love would decay within minutes of exposure..

Tattoo your name in my heart..
Transfer your blood in my veins..
Take out the staples, and kiss my scars away..
Mend me back together..
only to tear me apart again..


Comments about ``again by Dislocated Heart

  • (5/10/2011 2:18:00 AM)


    I like it. You have described it very well. Vivid imagery and remarkable style. Great write. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 10, 2011


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