Dislocated Heart

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*my Rose...* - Poem by Dislocated Heart

Babe, let me give you 12 roses..
I will love you till each one dies and fades away.

Little did she kno..
One was fake..
One that will last forever.

Babe, Put them roses in a vase.
Water them..
and watch each one fade.

Till the last one..
You'll see..
my love..
Will forever stay.

babe, my love is like that one rose..
I'll stay faithful,
so please dont let me go..

My love is like That one Rose...

Comments about *my Rose...* by Dislocated Heart

  • (2/9/2010 7:32:00 AM)

    pls pls pls never stop writing these poems.......i want one so bad
    peace + love,
    Justina Nicole
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  • (8/7/2009 11:53:00 AM)

    This is fabulous. And witty. I do love this one. You gotta lotta poems, Maestro! (Report) Reply

  • (4/19/2009 1:48:00 PM)

    i hope you continue to wright more

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  • (4/5/2009 8:45:00 AM)

    very pretty. what a great way to represent love. please continue to write more. (Report) Reply

  • (3/27/2009 2:28:00 PM)

    awww! ! ! !
    that's clever.
    Got to try that some time if only i had someone to try it with...

    xoxoxxxxx Black Rose
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  • Katrina Pilon (1/6/2009 12:46:00 PM)

    i like this poem its so sweet i like it (Report) Reply

  • Sebastine Humaemo (11/26/2008 9:33:00 AM)

    sweet poem....keep going.... (Report) Reply

  • (10/10/2008 1:16:00 PM)

    ah thats a sweet poem! ! im sure the girl u wrote this poem 2 will truely love it. (Report) Reply

  • (10/7/2008 1:36:00 PM)

    that's really sweet.. you gave to me as ur reading, a really nice feeling in my heart.. very nice (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 7, 2008

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