Roll
of dice;
Hiss
of snake
I am dead.
she rolls
it
only to
find ladder;
climbs up higher
smiles, stops, thinks,
Asks me
to
take chance
again. I try
hard
to
hide my
tears.
# A waltz wave poem
if oyu 'love' her.. chance her again.. :)
again as the title says a very naturally done poem with syllables...and a very interesting one too
ok, , again...again...again.... i'll throw a dice in the board of snakes and ladder it marks 10...but snake was there so i throw again the dice for a game its' already a ladder so i climbed again....ok... again...again...again...... it's your turn.....throw the dice...hehehehehhehehe am just in mood dear to write anything..can't sleep....so, , , allow me to write like this in your page....well, i dont know if it fits the topic whch you portray....lavs ya...kisssessssssssssssss
An admirable attempt at the Waltz Wave, and your poem is even shaped like a snake! S ;)
A waltz wave poem’ Yeah victory is the ‘thumbs up’ mantra of world…but loosing is a type of gaining...is equal to loosing…a gain…tear hide why… …powerful can smile with defeat… Thanks for sharing…10 Ms. Nivedita UK Dear Poet, Unable to post message… By heart I invite you to my page…and grace by your comments.if you please… Regards niv
A great waltz of snakes and ladders well thought out in this original word game in which you are very good at ++++++10 regards
Creative and good use of imagination. Expressive and with a twist of emotion. Interesting and fun to read. Debbie
very poignant Nikunj...and the wave form helps bring it out..... :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
if oyu 'love' her.. chance her again.. :)