Ben Gieske


Ageing - Poem by Ben Gieske

.......mirror in the attic
..........cobwebbed
......landscape of years
...........reflections
......some of my father
.....so many yesterdays
...seasons upon seasons
..pass the expiration date
.......shadows still there
............passing
........younger days
.........one last look

- April 1,2008


Comments about Ageing by Ben Gieske

  • Meggie Gultiano (5/12/2009 5:33:00 AM)


    one last look..hmm, i dont look like my father..he was a very handsome person for me.
    But i don't care what i saw in that mirror..that was a nice and an honest reflections of life, Ben..thanks a lot
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  • Dorothy- A. Holmes (10/9/2008 10:12:00 PM)


    ...Yesterday we laughed and loved and dreamed...

    Dorothy
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  • (4/3/2008 3:30:00 AM)


    A well-crafted poem, I too wrote a poem about mirrors, reflections of our life,10
    Lynda x
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 1, 2008



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