Ageing Poem by Ben Gieske

Ageing

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.......mirror in the attic
..........cobwebbed
......landscape of years
...........reflections
......some of my father
.....so many yesterdays
...seasons upon seasons
..pass the expiration date
.......shadows still there
............passing
........younger days
.........one last look

- April 1,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 12 May 2009

one last look..hmm, i dont look like my father..he was a very handsome person for me. But i don't care what i saw in that mirror..that was a nice and an honest reflections of life, Ben..thanks a lot

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 09 October 2008

...Yesterday we laughed and loved and dreamed... Dorothy

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Lynda Robson 03 April 2008

A well-crafted poem, I too wrote a poem about mirrors, reflections of our life,10 Lynda x

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