Ahmed Is Better Than Shakespeare Poem by ahmed khaled

Ahmed Is Better Than Shakespeare



writer of ages..
no doubt,
he is.
ahmed is better..
no doubt,
he is.
nicer,
wiser,
no doubt, he is.
the answer of 'why':
is the last message
and the last image....
when shakespeare writes..
shake a spear.
ahmed writes..
shake a pencil.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 24 September 2011

Hahahaha i laugh this very much why coz this is a way to see positivity in yourself in unique way...look here your lines... 'is the last message/ and the last image.... when shakespeare writes.. / shake a spear. ahmed writes.../shake a pencil.' You creatively use Shakespeare as ' 'Shake'spear'e ' hahaha That's why you are better then him, because when you(Ahmed) write poetry you shake a pencil instead of 'spear' hahaha But dont forget because of that spear, he became a poetry warrior in paper battle..hahaha So I guess Unwritten Soul is better than Ahmed, why? ? ? Because Ahmed's pencil cant write in soul, because it is Unwritten Soul...no matter how long you write, there's still Unwritten hahaha well dont angry I'm joking only..so dont you use spear to 'Hold It Against Me' hahaha...hahahaha..Nice writing idea, :) _Unwritten Soul

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