ahmed khaled

Christmaspoem - Poem by ahmed khaled

come to me, christ..
walking together..
on the rivers of sky..
on the light wings..
of loving angels..
on the compassionate wind..
dancing around hearts warmth..
on the peace, holding the sun..
to give all that beautiful..
and gracious light..
on the colours of those hearts..
willingly chose to be horizons..
and rainbows..
at the very moments..
of their sincere love..
on the sacred light..
that sun and stars..
have never known..
on the sound of swallows..
when they're humble..
passing by..
the scent of saint mary..
mixed with dew, dust..
and olive leaves..
in jerusalem..
come to me, christ..
to bless all humans..
by the heart's power..
by it's infinite belief..
and make them all..
at the very same time..
santa clause..
of wishes..
and love..

Comments about Christmaspoem by ahmed khaled

  • Okoye Charles Chukwudi (2/27/2012 8:57:00 AM)

    The ending was killing...brilliant.
    Come to me christ,
    and bless all human,
    making em all
    at the same time
    santa claus
    of wishes and love.

    Boy...this is gud....kudos.
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  • (1/28/2012 6:24:00 PM)

    A beautiful prayer poem for all mankine. Very touching. Voted 10 (Report) Reply

  • (1/10/2012 3:22:00 AM)

    Heart felt and impressive. Great write Ahmed (Report) Reply

  • (1/7/2012 7:11:00 AM)

    You've had alot of great works in your hand, there is creativity in your words. I like this! (Report) Reply

  • (1/5/2012 2:28:00 AM)

    Come to me love the line. Your poem is full of love just like Christmas day. Love it....... (Report) Reply

  • (1/4/2012 3:18:00 PM)

    This poems express the wish of a human heart for the Savior of the World to come in al of his glory with those blessing that is needed by humans on earth. Bestowing all the grace and mercy upon them as he see that is necessary. Jesus is everything. It is a prayer in request of a need to be fulfilled. (Report) Reply

  • Nicky Hill (1/3/2012 2:41:00 PM)

    thats really lovely heart warming happy new year to you. (Report) Reply

  • Elizabeth Wesley (1/3/2012 10:38:00 AM)

    A very lovely verse celebrating the beauty and love that empowers the Christmas spirit. You seem to have the gift of saying things in a most wonderful way. Hope your new year is filled with inspiriation. (Report) Reply

  • (1/3/2012 9:35:00 AM)

    A beautiful write on Chritmas, narration of the Grace of Almighty (Report) Reply

  • (1/3/2012 6:05:00 AM)

    very beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rigzin Namgyal (1/2/2012 8:07:00 AM)

    ..and make them santa clause..of wishes..n love..
    ..well written..beautifully crafted...
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  • (1/2/2012 6:17:00 AM)

    nice poem for christmas! (Report) Reply

  • (1/1/2012 11:08:00 AM)

    A good christmas poem Ahmed. Keep up the good work (Report) Reply

  • (1/1/2012 7:28:00 AM)

    nice write, i loved the last lines..... and happy new year to you (Report) Reply

  • (12/31/2011 11:18:00 PM)

    Excellent write....your words painted Christmas in my mind, very expressive...Merry Christmas and a happy new year! (Report) Reply

  • (12/31/2011 2:42:00 PM)

    A great poem for christmas. A great write. (Report) Reply

  • Cosmic Dreamer (12/31/2011 11:25:00 AM)

    Very well written... Well done... (Report) Reply

  • (12/31/2011 9:48:00 AM)

    Really very beautiful with such a nice, natural flowing rhythm, with some very moving poetic sentiment, loved the lines 'on the light wings..of loving angels..'

    Happy New Year to you ahmed.
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  • (12/31/2011 9:47:00 AM)

    great poem...really nice (Report) Reply

  • Neetha Sasidharan (12/31/2011 9:21:00 AM)

    an apt poem esp. at this time of the year.
    scent of saint mary
    i liked that one.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 24, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 24, 2011

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