Love_Heart...Song Poem by ahmed khaled

Love_Heart...Song

Rating: 4.7


didn't you know......
love is made of iron......
didn't you know......
heart is made of glass......
imagine......
what could happen......
if love......
strike the heart......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 10 November 2011

I think, it's a rare imagination though it's a well-expressed thought in a short poem... I've many to say about love but a few words, ''Love is Divine! ''..

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Shamba Kaunda 09 November 2011

its so rare to express feelings and imaginations in such a short phrase...well done..please read and comment on my poem i wanted to paint, thanx

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Costin Tanasescu 09 November 2011

Ahmed, i can say about your 'love_heart...song' poem that you are on the right poetry way. I usually prefer the poems who contains concise lyrics so you are very close to my favorite poetry filed, sfere... good look!

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Jack Price 09 November 2011

First sir, thanks for the invite! It is a remarkable and striking poem. I myself like short poetry because it is thought provoking. I will add this to my favorites list. thanks again. call me J. L.

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Benjamin Paa Willie 09 November 2011

Expertly done. good work

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Enyinwa Okechukwu Enyinwa 19 November 2011

Nice setting.. your works are great...

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Kaila George 13 November 2011

yes love is fragile...anything can happen when in love...its a wonderful poem and depics how fragile it can be when in a relationship...how you treat it can be intresting as well...well done..excellent work

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Eric Cockrell 11 November 2011

very good imagery... and very true! good poetry!

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Abdallah Gamal 10 November 2011

Wow beautiful poem, outstanding, with a little lines you drew a unique picture full of different metaphors. Great work ma bro. :)

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K. Lemonspunk 10 November 2011

Very good. Lovely wording and great image to bring to mind. It is very nice.

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