didn't you know......
love is made of iron......
didn't you know......
heart is made of glass......
imagine......
what could happen......
if love......
strike the heart......
its so rare to express feelings and imaginations in such a short phrase...well done..please read and comment on my poem i wanted to paint, thanx
Ahmed, i can say about your 'love_heart...song' poem that you are on the right poetry way. I usually prefer the poems who contains concise lyrics so you are very close to my favorite poetry filed, sfere... good look!
First sir, thanks for the invite! It is a remarkable and striking poem. I myself like short poetry because it is thought provoking. I will add this to my favorites list. thanks again. call me J. L.
yes love is fragile...anything can happen when in love...its a wonderful poem and depics how fragile it can be when in a relationship...how you treat it can be intresting as well...well done..excellent work
Wow beautiful poem, outstanding, with a little lines you drew a unique picture full of different metaphors. Great work ma bro. :)
Very good. Lovely wording and great image to bring to mind. It is very nice.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I think, it's a rare imagination though it's a well-expressed thought in a short poem... I've many to say about love but a few words, ''Love is Divine! ''..