ahmed khaled

A Green Poem In Jerusalem - Poem by ahmed khaled

in the beginning..
it was a colour,
a colour decided to be a poem
and it was.
so fresh and green,
as green as olive trees..
shining in jerusalem,
scattering peace and wishes..
as sacred pearls,
to all lovers and pilgrims
i saw that poem..
in a green voice..
coming from light remains,
by the right place of tur mountain
as it was sung by saints and angels
and manifested by the holy spirit, ..
who wrote it's title,
before the dawn does plant..
the dancing of wishes,
to be forever..
'a green poem..
..in jerusalem'.

Comments about A Green Poem In Jerusalem by ahmed khaled

  • (11/13/2014 4:16:00 AM)

    beautiful sense of freshness and vitality, excellent imagery. really enjoy your poetry Ahmed. (Report) Reply

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  • (1/7/2012 6:35:00 PM)

    Balance, harmony and nature, forever green! Thanks for the share. I invite you to comment on my poem We Can Be Raindrops :) (Report) Reply

  • Rajendran Muthiah (1/3/2012 10:05:00 AM)

    From the comments of Almedia Knight Oliver and Jacqui Broad, I presume that many a symbol beautify this poem. A chain of symbolic lines connects the poem as whole. (Report) Reply

  • (12/31/2011 2:43:00 AM)

    All that I can say is that was beautiful and thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • David Gerardino (12/31/2011 12:28:00 AM)

    read rich mullins, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , (Report) Reply

  • (12/29/2011 1:46:00 PM)

    OH, what a Jerusalem... the one we all hope for.. great green poem, Khaled (Report) Reply

  • (12/29/2011 11:07:00 AM)

    A beautiful piece. (Report) Reply

  • (12/29/2011 2:49:00 AM)

    Green and love is the nature of nature. And it can be presented any better. Good work! (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2011 7:19:00 PM)

    I think this is your best one! (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2011 2:43:00 PM)

    Nice and spiritual poem Ahmed...i like it. (Report) Reply

  • Alicia Meyers (12/28/2011 2:02:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. (: I loved it(: (Report) Reply

  • Joses Tirtabudi (12/28/2011 1:37:00 AM)

    Great poem. Great picture language. (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/24/2011 1:34:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem! !
    May be sung by an archangel))))
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  • Jacqui Broad (12/22/2011 1:07:00 AM)

    Ahmed, I think an angel sits on your shoulder and whispers sweet words of beauty in your ear. Peace for Jerusalem! Green pastures of love, where there's no more war. Then Jesus can return, riding on a donkey, and people greeting Him with green leaves of palmtrees. Beautiful poem... (Report) Reply

  • (12/21/2011 12:27:00 PM)

    Beautiful as always. Your poems always
    Bring colour to the world. A great write.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 21, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 21, 2011

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