A Green Poem In Jerusalem Poem by ahmed khaled

A Green Poem In Jerusalem

Rating: 5.0


in the beginning..
it was a colour,
a colour decided to be a poem
and it was.
so fresh and green,
as green as olive trees..
shining in jerusalem,
scattering peace and wishes..
as sacred pearls,
to all lovers and pilgrims
i saw that poem..
in a green voice..
coming from light remains,
by the right place of tur mountain
as it was sung by saints and angels
and manifested by the holy spirit, ..
who wrote it's title,
before the dawn does plant..
the dancing of wishes,
to be forever..
'a green poem..
..in jerusalem'.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ifedayo Oshin 29 December 2011

OH, what a Jerusalem... the one we all hope for.. great green poem, Khaled

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Sally Plumb Plumb 29 December 2011

A beautiful piece.

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Benjamin Paa Willie 29 December 2011

Green and love is the nature of nature. And it can be presented any better. Good work!

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Martin Bermea 28 December 2011

I think this is your best one!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 28 December 2011

Nice and spiritual poem Ahmed...i like it.

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Josephine Collett 13 November 2014

beautiful sense of freshness and vitality, excellent imagery. really enjoy your poetry Ahmed.

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Margaret Beil 07 January 2012

Balance, harmony and nature, forever green! Thanks for the share. I invite you to comment on my poem We Can Be Raindrops :)

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Rajendran Muthiah 03 January 2012

From the comments of Almedia Knight Oliver and Jacqui Broad, I presume that many a symbol beautify this poem. A chain of symbolic lines connects the poem as whole.

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Craig Mize 31 December 2011

All that I can say is that was beautiful and thank you for sharing

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David Gerardino 31 December 2011

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