in the beginning..
it was a colour,
a colour decided to be a poem
and it was.
so fresh and green,
as green as olive trees..
shining in jerusalem,
scattering peace and wishes..
as sacred pearls,
to all lovers and pilgrims
i saw that poem..
in a green voice..
coming from light remains,
by the right place of tur mountain
as it was sung by saints and angels
and manifested by the holy spirit, ..
who wrote it's title,
before the dawn does plant..
the dancing of wishes,
to be forever..
'a green poem..
..in jerusalem'.
Green and love is the nature of nature. And it can be presented any better. Good work!
beautiful sense of freshness and vitality, excellent imagery. really enjoy your poetry Ahmed.
Balance, harmony and nature, forever green! Thanks for the share. I invite you to comment on my poem We Can Be Raindrops :)
From the comments of Almedia Knight Oliver and Jacqui Broad, I presume that many a symbol beautify this poem. A chain of symbolic lines connects the poem as whole.
All that I can say is that was beautiful and thank you for sharing
read rich mullins, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
OH, what a Jerusalem... the one we all hope for.. great green poem, Khaled