ahmed khaled


Strings Of Freedom - Poem by ahmed khaled

walk with me..
you and me, not separate
our poem is totality
and our poetry,
is all months,
from january..
to december.
walk with me..
where to decide
the strings of poetry
mixed with both,
the guitar's strings
and the strings..
of all seasons.
walk with me..
it's me, who guides
to all strings,
which said no
and refused to sleep
but refused not..
to dream.
walk with me..
i'm still to wait
for all strings,
walking in time
and resisting,
being jailed..
in the guitar.


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  • (1/23/2013 8:00:00 AM)

    Loved it, loved the flow, loved th expression of freedom of the soul and of the mind... (Report)Reply

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  • Alicia Meyers (1/11/2012 3:50:00 PM)

    Really fantastic. :) Love it. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/6/2012 10:02:00 PM)

    Poets of the Earth, unite in the poorest poetic language of the world!)))
    Nice poem, clear and short. Google translates it without any problem!)))
    Let it be our anthem! Let it get 10!
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  • (12/7/2011 5:24:00 AM)

    may i have to read it twice..but really it's a masterpiece
    a real way to show the desire to write... :))
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  • (12/2/2011 6:48:00 AM)

    this really is an amazing poem. sorry i didnt get to it sooner, been held up and havent been on in a while.
    but truly, youre a great poet, keep up the good work. youll go far =)
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  • Allemagne Roßmann (11/30/2011 8:47:00 AM)

    Very well written......and majestic write.. (Report)Reply

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  • Allemagne Roßmann (11/30/2011 8:46:00 AM)

    Poetic melodrama walking the scouts to the tunes of guitar as the strings lack drums broken by the seasons of separation.Now is the time of Freiheit...now is emancipation to be robbed from the strings which robbed so far the slumber...Majestic write and hope all will walk like Egyptians..... (Report)Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (11/10/2011 4:42:00 AM)

    Beautiful and I never misunderstood your nice words...Ahmed, we'll be your shoes to follow your steps and walk with you...as you step on the ground we also print the sand, together we walk as our breathes unite, so wear your heart with your soul, wear your paper with ink and we will flow together with you in art melody called poetry :) _Unwritten Soul (Report)Reply

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  • Richard McClellan (11/7/2011 8:36:00 PM)

    Yea, I agree with Sally, it needs focus! You should refine it at a later date after some time as went by... Good poem though... (Report)Reply

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  • (11/7/2011 6:22:00 PM)

    Nice piece... although I didn't understand it all. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/7/2011 5:38:00 PM)

    we must work as one person to spread love, freedom, peace and humanity for all humanity.i love you all poemhunter poets and i love poemhunter.warm love for you. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/7/2011 11:40:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem, truly a splendid write! (Report)Reply

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  • Ency Bearis (11/7/2011 4:33:00 AM)

    great piece, lovely lyrical poem (Report)Reply

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  • (11/7/2011 4:01:00 AM)

    true freedom lies beyond death...before that it is all illusion. (Report)Reply

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  • Jacqui Broad (11/7/2011 2:00:00 AM)

    Life is a song. And as poets we provide the rhythm, spirit. Cry with us when we are sad. Laugh with us when we are happy. Love with us when we are in love. We are the poets, and we will provide the music people wants to hear. And we'll touch their heart's strings with the perfect melody... Great poem! (Report)Reply

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  • (11/6/2011 5:15:00 PM)

    beautiful write, and it expresses an opinion of equality, I like that. Thanks for the share (Report)Reply

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  • Matt Mooney (11/6/2011 4:42:00 PM)

    I think this free flowing poem is saying how free we are in Poemhunter to be poets to one another-a true brotherhood and sisterhood.10. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/6/2011 3:06:00 PM)

    Well i seem to get the message, from this piece. nice (Report)Reply

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  • (11/6/2011 3:05:00 PM)

    Well i seem to get the message, from this piece. nice (Report)Reply

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  • Leonard Dabydeen (11/6/2011 3:02:00 PM)

    Lovely poem. Heart-felt appeal to join forces with poets and their poetry...creating
    ' strings of freedom '.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 6, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 10, 2011


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