Alankar(Decor)-232 Poem by Indira Renganathan

Alankar(Decor)-232

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Bad Luck(Dixdeux)

Dixdeux, French for ten-two, is illustrated by Anthony Fusco in Caulkins' Handbook on Haiku and
Other Form Poems,1970.It appears to have developed as an alternative to the Haiku.

The Dixdeux is:
written in any number of tercets. When written in more than one tercet, L3 becomes a refrain.
syllabic, with 10-10-2 syllables per line.
is unrhymed.
titled, unlike the haiku.


Bad Luck

A set mouse-trap waits in silence to hunt
Up and down running the pestering mouse..
- - - - - - - - - Alas! !


Morning mistress runs to the trap to check
A hole in that wooden trap laughs at her
- - - - - - - - - Alas! !

Monday, May 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: poem,fun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 25 January 2018

A set mouse-trap waits in silence to hunt Up and down running the pestering mouse.. I enjoyed humor in your Alankar(Decor) ! Thanks dear madam for sharing!

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