Alankar(Decor)-240 Poem by Indira Renganathan

Alankar(Decor)-240

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The Triquain, found in Berg's Pathways for the Poet 1977 appears to be an attempt at combining the haiku
and Crapsey cinquain. It was created by L. Stanley Cheney and referred to in both the Caulkins' Handbook and Pathways.
This form comes a little closer to the purpose of haiku than some other haiku wannabees.
There is another invented form also called a Triquain that appeared on the internet about 25 years later
written in a syllabic heptastich.

The Triquain is:
a tristich, a poem in 3 lines. It is composed in 3 units, L1 introduces the subject,
L2 expands and leads into action,
L3 is the enlightenment or question.
syllabic, with 2-7-7 syllable count per line.
Titled, unlike the haiku.

1.Home Care

Baby
Kicking, shivering, crying
Milk or mother does she want?


2.Beauty

Awing
Zephyr, gales, lightning, rumblings
Hooray, nature's crescendoes

Tuesday, September 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,nature,poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 22 September 2017

Liked this form of poetry, both the poems are amazing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 September 2017

This form comes a little closer to the purpose. Life and nature both are closely associated. Amazing decor poem is shared here is brilliantly expressed.10

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