Alankar(Decor)-256 Poem by Indira Renganathan

Alankar(Decor)-256

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Synchronicity is an invented verse form written in the first person revealing
accidental yet seemingly synchronized events. Created by Debra Gundy who suggests there
be a pivot or twist in the last quarter of the poem. Synchronicity is the simultaneous occurence
of events which appear meaningfully related but have no discoverable causal connection.
The elements of the Synchronicity are:

stanzaic, written 4 or more tercets.
syllabic,8-8-2 syllables per line of each tercet.
unrhymed.
written in the first person describing simultaneous events that appear to be connected
but could simply be coincidental.
written with a pivot or twist occurring at the end of the poem.

Expectations

I often tell myself so strong
'Hey dear, don't worry, dad will come
Be brave'

Bad moments and situations..
'Don't worry, dad will support you'
I say

I'm consoled and advised by my
Dad alone to get rid of all
Worries

Sitting in the porch I'm crying
So hurt by today's incident
Oh God..!

I wish dad comes and helps me find
A way to get rid of present
Problem

Now I'm struggling in a numb mood
Not knowing what to do, oh God
Send dad

I'm helplessly crying so long
Suddenly I sense..oh my God..! !
My dad....! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 08 June 2019

Thank you dear madam for submitting here the elements of the Synchronicity with expectations. All the expectations follow the rule. viz.written 4 or more tercets.syllabic,8-8-2 syllables per line of each tercet.unrhymed.written in the first person describing simultaneous events that appear to be connected. Beautiful presentation.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 June 2019

A beautiful and unique write in a wonderful verse form. Liked the opening lines of this write. Very informative.

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