Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

All Right You Win

So you want me to write a poem.
Why?
Oh, so you can get into my mind,
Know my inner most thoughts and
Trample around inside my head.
Go write your own poem...
I'm busy weaving halos for those imps
Of hollow dreams.
This is a poem you say...
I had hoped you wouldn't notice.


October 7,2009
7: 50 p.m.

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 7, 2009
Poem Edited: Thursday, October 8, 2009

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Comments about All Right You Win by Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

  • Ben Gieske (10/8/2009 4:09:00 PM)

    A new twist. Amusing. I like your sense of irony. I am wondering just what inspired you to write this poem. I can feel the burst of emotion.

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  • Iris Washington (10/8/2009 9:53:00 AM)

    Mrs. Holmes,

    I love this Poem.

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  • James MclainJames Mclain (10/7/2009 7:29:00 PM)

    We cannot help..
    but notice..
    how you dance..
    around..
    inside our heads..
    like dreams...iip

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