All To War Poem by Ezekiel Johnson

All To War

Rating: 3.6


I lost my mother
I lost my father
I lost my brother
And lost my dreams too

I lost my friends
I lost my family
I lost my sister
And lost my will too

I lost my school
I lost my work
I lost my city
And lost my rights too

I lost my day
I lost my night
I lost my sight
And lost my morning dew

(to the soul of every victim of war)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ricky Francis 22 April 2008

i love it it`s 10 material u could make it funny if on the last line you put mounain dew

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Akito Sunforest 08 October 2007

that's kinda sad.: (but i luv it!

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Kari Jimenez 03 February 2008

thats an amazing poem! i almost cried

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Katie P 09 August 2007

i really like it! :) very good!

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Adell Jim 18 April 2009

all to war thats a really good peom honey! !

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Shah Jehan Ashrafi 24 August 2013

Oh the war is indeed disastrous...keep writing and life will be meaningful

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Buddhadeb Baroi 11 September 2012

A lovely sensuous poem.. Nice one keep on writing my dear..

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Ncamie Pretty Khanyile 26 November 2010

Lost everything which resulted in lost of my self aspect.nice poem

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Erin Wells 17 September 2009

That was really good!

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Adell Jim 18 April 2009

all to war thats a really good peom honey! !

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