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Alone

Rating: 5.0

I don't want to die alone.
I once loved a girl I thought I knew.
Her eyes caught mine, and brought my mind to peace.
When her lips meant mine, my breath gave way.
When we held hands, I knew my troubles were far away.
When she whispered in my ear, my walls would break.
With her, I became a listener.
With her, I gave my secrets.
She was my world, my confidence, my motivation.
I once loved a girl, a girl I thought I knew.

And now my heart beats, to a song a song of being forever alone.
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Monday, March 10, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sad
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Wrote this because I was cheated on by a girl who i fell in love with.
I thought she would be the one.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noreen Carden 10 March 2014

Hey Gary this is a really beautiful.When she whispered in my ear, my walls would break that line says it all. Beautifully written Gary well done I give it a ten

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