Anzelyne shideshe

Alone - Poem by Anzelyne shideshe

Home alone,
Silent walls,
Crept breathe,
A quiver of hallucinations,
Smoky kitchen,
Ghost busted?
Seduced to a dance,
A romantic ghost tune,
After a sizzling ghost dinner,

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about Alone by Anzelyne shideshe

  • Chinedu Dike (6/5/2017 12:17:00 PM)

    Lovely portrayal of loneliness. You're a beautiful lady Anzelyne, lovely picture of you. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni (10/21/2016 11:47:00 PM)

    Even the picture agrees with the poem, i observed it. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (7/25/2016 8:38:00 AM)

    Loaded with a lonliness that leaps and longs for love. A compelling composition! (Report) Reply

    Anzelyne Shideshe (7/25/2016 4:01:00 PM)

    Thanks for reading

  • Edward Kofi Louis (5/21/2016 6:27:00 AM)

    Loneliness! But, with dreams ahead. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Anzelyne Shideshe (5/21/2016 7:03:00 AM)

    Thanks for Reading Edward Koffi Louis

  • Dev Anand (4/14/2016 11:30:00 PM)

    A quiver of hallucinations, and finally seduced to a dance.... like your poem very much. dev
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    Anzelyne Shideshe (4/15/2016 5:41:00 AM)

    Thanks Dev.

  • Anil Kumar Panda (3/4/2016 11:26:00 PM)

    So many people are suffering from loneliness. May be due to broken relationship or home. Can feel the pain of loneliness in the lines. (Report) Reply

    Anzelyne Shideshe (3/6/2016 1:11:00 AM)

    I'm glad you got the message thanks for reading Anil.

  • (2/7/2016 2:37:00 PM)

    Loneliness can be a devastating state of mind, it fills us with haunting thoughts of insanity. Just walking out the door and looking to nature can give a breath of fresh air, renewing our spirit interiorly and giving us hope in tomorrow. Wonderful imagery and insight! 10++++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

    Anzelyne Shideshe (2/7/2016 9:03:00 PM)

    Thanks Roseann for your wise thoughts.

  • Clarence Prince (12/14/2015 2:02:00 PM)

    Yes, life can be like that at times, but there is hope for a change
    in the future, so don't give up hope! And remember, a little prayer might help!
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    Anzelyne Shideshe (12/14/2015 3:17:00 PM)

    Thanks for your motivational thoughts.Prayer's never fail.

  • Unwritten Soul (12/7/2015 7:00:00 AM)

    Yeah i understand happened to me millions time...but dont be afraid to keep writing, because from here we can learn (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (12/7/2015 5:26:00 AM)

    Hi dear, in a whole poem is all boldly tell about how it felt when being alone and attacked by loneliness just accurate....I have nothing to against you dear Anzelyne, but like me maybe you also rushing to write without checking...dehydration and hallucination...whatever it is, its a nice work! (Report) Reply

    Anzelyne Shideshe (12/7/2015 5:57:00 AM)

    Sometimes I've to jackle between English and German for a year now I've been speaking Germany mostly
    Infact, here at PH I'm in touch with the language.

    Anzelyne Shideshe (12/7/2015 5:42:00 AM)

    Thank you unwritten soul

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (12/7/2015 2:17:00 AM)

    silent walls, alone, drunk and at the same time dehydrated seduced to a dance insanity? These are all my experience too it is normal when u are away from home living in a foreign nation.. courage! ! ! boldness! ! ! face lif as it aers. remember you havelt to achieve. God bless you. tony (Report) Reply

    Anzelyne Shideshe (12/7/2015 3:28:00 AM)

    H! i Tony, sometimes you feel like you in your own world, but then life has to go on, alone or not.Thanks for your comment I'm overwhelmed.

  • Shakil Ahmed (12/5/2015 7:25:00 AM)

    loneliness finds a nice presentation in the poem, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

    Anzelyne Shideshe (12/5/2015 8:29:00 AM)

    Thanks Shakil

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2015

Poem Edited: Monday, December 14, 2015

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