Mahfooz Ali

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Alone And Helpless - Poem by Mahfooz Ali

Crying all alone while you walk away.
Feeling naked and helpless,
After telling you all my secrets.
All my lies.
Closing my eyes,
Picturing the look on your face,
That scared me so.
Pretending everything's ok,
Knowing I'm willingly throwing my life away,
Right before you.
All my dreams,
Come crashing down.
All in one moment,
I'm scared,

Comments about Alone And Helpless by Mahfooz Ali

  • (11/30/2008 12:59:00 AM)

    really a nice poem sir... (Report) Reply

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  • (8/29/2007 11:00:00 AM)

    i love this poem. its like you can picture these exact moments happening. (Report) Reply

  • (6/24/2007 2:21:00 AM)

    The Most two difficult things in life are
    First, Living with principles.And, Living alone.....When You come to solitary stage...then Capital princple of life gone......Even in dark(Dark days too) Shadow also leave from you.
    I smelled Nothing Serious in your poem But Important....dear.
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  • (4/12/2007 8:40:00 AM)

    Mahfooz this is Ayesha(ogga) , No U are not alone. We are with U. (Report) Reply

  • (3/22/2007 12:09:00 PM)

    Knowing I am willingly throwing my life away.
    great senstivity portrayed. Chhavi
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  • (3/22/2007 1:50:00 AM)

    These moments are really horrifying…but when we are naked….we are ready to wear divine rob.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 19, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, February 4, 2011

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