Alone In My Darknees Poem by hazem al jaber

Alone In My Darknees

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alone in my darknees

i was alone...
alone i live in my darkness..
no one share me..
no one considerated my feelings..

i was a human without sense...
without loving....
and i was without heart....

i wasn`t saw in my darknees, only myself..
and my blackest dark..

suddenly.. a light came to me from a far way..
yes, its come and be near and close to me..

its come and its lights my darkness..
its let me to see around me..
its knowing me who was near me...

then i became not alone
i am with others..
became a human shared in feelings with others..

i became a human with a feelings..
with a loving....
and i was with a heart....

suddenly agian, a lights wants to go...
after its lights my darkness..
and after its make my heart a white..

no, no, don`t let my heart become agian blackest..
and don`t let me be agian alone...
plz don`t do.....

Jordan Antrim 20 December 2005

Good poem, Makes you think.

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Nibedita Deb 13 December 2005

Nice poem. But is this light love? Or the darkness is death? Would like to know.

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Fox Nekitsune 21 November 2005

Sounds like the shadows over me, nice work

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Inner Whispers 05 February 2009

hazem, i understand what u want to portray here.(Just be careful for the words, hmn...) I can see u are a very good poet...nice thoughts, hazem!

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Terrance Woolridge 21 March 2007

That's a hot write, Good 1 Hazem

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Francesca Johnson 06 November 2006

Hi Hazem......great poem, well expressed.....full of the darkness you have felt in your heart. It comes across very strongly. A great write. Love, Fran xx

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Donny S 09 May 2006

Hey, this is a really great poem! I hope you don't feel alone like this..... Good day Dona

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Elya Thorn 01 January 2006

Great poem! I loved to read it!

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