Sunday, February 15, 2009

Alone Lives A Tree Comments

Rating: 4.8

Born so high,
Lot my siblings die,
Uncared seems my mother,
Battle only with puny armour,
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Vignesh Ravishankar Shanmugam
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a lovely rhyme in that poem...keep going

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 March 2009

The ill fated lone tree cries for company. Sometimes a lone human life also is like this. Well composed.

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Dream Catcher 01 March 2009

i enjoyed reading it a lot.Its the kind of poem that makes you think about the realities of life.

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Ramesh T A 01 March 2009

Nice rhyming poem to read! Please keep it up!

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Mei Jade Ni. 01 March 2009

very imaginative and designed to stimulate the mind.

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Ivor Hogg 01 March 2009

I enjoyed your theme and your rhyming skill but you really need to pay attention to meter Read aloud it comes across as choppy

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An Angel Without Wings 22 February 2009

Very good, I love the symbolism to the tree. Very creative!

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Jose Murguia 21 February 2009

wow thats a good one i never would have thought to write about a tree very good a 10! ..

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Jim Norausky 20 February 2009

Nicely written poem that flows smoothly and pleasant to read. Well done. Jim

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Cathy Mimano 20 February 2009

its a wonderful poem Vignesh, the nature is brought out well and the words create a mental picture of what you are talking about thus helping the reader relate to the poem.great piece!

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Jimmy Hoffa 20 February 2009

I enjoy many poems about nature, but this one really captures the spirit if the tree. I loved it

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Christina Phan 20 February 2009

Wow i luv it n i give 10+. well done. the poem give me an imagery.

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Darkness J 20 February 2009

Brilliant work! You deservea a 10 and more! !

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Greenwolfe 1962 20 February 2009

Yes. Such is the life of a tree. A life lived alone and stately left alone. It is a fortunate destiny for the least of them. For the greatest of them, a curse. An interesting subject rightly explored. Not as elegant in the wording but OK. GW62

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Evans Cutler Sewor 20 February 2009

it a nice it has a sense of tell the world how one can survive no matter what he or she goes thru it lovely a lone tree, good work

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sumaira .....ir 17 February 2009

lovely work done....... wonderful write.. 10/10

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Vignesh Ravishankar Shanmugam

Vignesh Ravishankar Shanmugam

Coimbatore, Tamilnadu, India
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