Born so high,
Lot my siblings die,
Uncared seems my mother,
Battle only with puny armour,
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The ill fated lone tree cries for company. Sometimes a lone human life also is like this. Well composed.
i enjoyed reading it a lot.Its the kind of poem that makes you think about the realities of life.
I enjoyed your theme and your rhyming skill but you really need to pay attention to meter Read aloud it comes across as choppy
Very good, I love the symbolism to the tree. Very creative!
wow thats a good one i never would have thought to write about a tree very good a 10! ..
Nicely written poem that flows smoothly and pleasant to read. Well done. Jim
its a wonderful poem Vignesh, the nature is brought out well and the words create a mental picture of what you are talking about thus helping the reader relate to the poem.great piece!
I enjoy many poems about nature, but this one really captures the spirit if the tree. I loved it
Wow i luv it n i give 10+. well done. the poem give me an imagery.
Yes. Such is the life of a tree. A life lived alone and stately left alone. It is a fortunate destiny for the least of them. For the greatest of them, a curse. An interesting subject rightly explored. Not as elegant in the wording but OK. GW62
it a nice it has a sense of tell the world how one can survive no matter what he or she goes thru it lovely a lone tree, good work
a lovely rhyme in that poem...keep going