Allenika ...

Alone On Sea

Alone i lay on a wooden raft
Alone i stay in the dark
Alone i pray to survive
Alone i may not survive

Alone i look out the sea
Alone i wake up on the sea
Alone i seek out for help
Alone i may not survive

Alone i eat my dry food
Alone i drink the salty water
Alone i sit in the cold
Alone i may not survive

Alone, yes, alone i stare at the storm
Alone, yes, alone i live on the sea
Alone, yes, alone i wait for the rescue boat
Alone, yes, alone i may not survive

Alone, yes, alone i pray to be safe
Alone, yes, alone i call out for help
Alone, yes, alone i get on the boat
Alone, yes, alone i was rescued

Alone, yes, alone i lived on sea for months
Alone, yes, alone i walk ashore unaided
Alone, yes, alone i continue to hold the
Guinness World Record for survival at sea

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 25, 2006
Poem Edited: Monday, July 19, 2010

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  • Iftekhar IftiIftekhar Ifti (2/15/2019 1:01:00 PM)

    If we prefer to be alone. It’s better place to rejoice in the sea.

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  • wrhr4y (1/8/2018 7:16:00 AM)

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  • Walterrean Salley (11/23/2016 4:39:00 PM)

    (Alone On Sea - Poem by Allenika.) **So glad the poet was rescued. A great depiction of life.

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  • Brian JaniBrian Jani (5/13/2014 12:29:00 PM)

    Allenika Amazing poetic skills here

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  • Negarin 1401 (9/17/2013 1:32:00 PM)

    love poem..i feel sincerity with it...sea..alone...i live near the sea..nice feeling

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  • Aijaz Asif (7/28/2013 3:53:00 PM)

    Alone I will walk
    on my last mile....
    nicely written it reminded me of a movie of Tom Hanks....

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  • Nasarudheen ParameswaranNasarudheen Parameswaran (5/1/2013 7:04:00 AM)

    A song on/of solitude.

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  • Emily SlmEmily Slm (12/16/2012 2:55:00 PM)

    This poem reminds me of the movie; The Life Of Pi

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  • Geo Laxman Anand Sai (7/16/2012 10:38:00 AM)

    Alone, yes, alone reveals the Truth

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  • Ledumetse BakokoLedumetse Bakoko (5/17/2012 12:28:00 PM)

    really love this poem

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  • Kevin Russell (4/12/2012 8:04:00 PM)

    I loved this poem it reminds me of a time my friends and I were stuck in Nantucket Sound when we were too young to be out on a sailboat by ourselves. Theres some great original poetry on this website as well http: //www.sharingpoetry.com/

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  • Sandra DdjebarniSandra Ddjebarni (3/24/2012 3:05:00 PM)

    waaaaaw amazing words i love it

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  • Sandra DdjebarniSandra Ddjebarni (3/24/2012 3:04:00 PM)

    waaaaw amazing words i realy love it

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  • Hanyani NgobeniHanyani Ngobeni (2/16/2012 7:34:00 AM)

    alove it, its alsome, fantastic, ecstatic, manufic......alone.........alone indeed.

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  • Jessie Peter (11/5/2011 12:53:00 PM)

    hahhaa! i like the twist in the end.
    though the poem is about being alone and is gloomy, the end sure puts a smile on your face! ! ! :)

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  • Jessie Peter (11/5/2011 12:53:00 PM)

    hahhaa! i like the twist in the end.
    though the poem is about being alone and is gloomy, the end sure puts a smile on your face! ! ! :)

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  • Raj Jadhav (8/22/2011 10:47:00 PM)

    Well,
    xplaning my situation right now

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  • Costa Anakiev (8/27/2009 12:36:00 PM)

    Well, it sounds like a song. Well done. Konstantin.

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  • Bryan Alexander (8/26/2009 3:23:00 PM)

    beautiful I am not familiar with this mans story and because of you I will

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