Alone With My All Poem by Nazma Lucky

Alone With My All

Rating: 5.0

Nobody loved me such before
If having loved,
Stealing all loves of impassioned lovers
of the earth
I would seclude in the nook
of my bosom
To love him only.

Nobody called me such before
If having called,
Trampling fields, crops, grains
of the earth
I would run, run with my all attempt
to the end of the earth
Where he is.

Nobody desired me such before
If having desired,
I would give my soul, body, blood, cells,
dreams, hopes to him.
would stake my all existance
only for him.

Nobody laid sleepless all night
in waiting to meet me before
If having remained,
I would make that assemblage


Dr.subhendu Kar 18 March 2010

I would give my soul, body, blood, cells, dreams, hopes to him....................................quite passionately emotive in quest of love yet ingenious, and of course of unique genre,10++, thanks for sharing

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 18 March 2010

Chemistry of love is beyond any genetics. You are really lucky, Nazma, having such passions for love, nature and poetry homogenized all together. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Chitra - 18 March 2010

passionate write on immortalised love..well crafted, perfect to the bone

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Pregnant with a powerful passion. Well done my friend.

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 07 April 2010

A rare poem on love. I am really lucky to get chance to read this passionate poem. But one thing my dear, love at first sight is not always love at last sight....Many ups and down. get prepared for all...

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 02 September 2018

wau what a feelings.....its so nice...go ahead, , , thanks my poem also....

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Nazma. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Vishal Sharma 16 June 2013

greatly compiled poem with pure tone i loved ur poem and listen dear you are a poet far better than me i am not saying this but your poem says so well done

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Shihabudheen K J 24 May 2012

Hai its so wild passions.ready to die for ur lover feel.

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R.k Das 02 April 2012

a marvellous facet of a woman's love, so nicely composed into a lovely poem, thanx

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