vanessa feliciano

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Alpha Of The Darkness - Poem by vanessa feliciano

He is the alpha wolf
Dangerous to my soul
He is seeping darkness
yet i need him more and more
He claws into my life
And makes living seem more painful
And yet i follow him
with reasons less then gainful
his eyes are like a trance
Yet they Peirce me with their depth
but all the pain that he causes me
Wont make me love him less
I'll follow him into the dark
With no thought of what should come
And though i know he's dangerous
He'll always be the one
Until sun rises steadily
And he's gone into the woods
I'll continue to love and need him
as much as anyone could

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  • (1/15/2010 7:57:00 AM)


    Line seven.

    'And yet i follow you'
    should read 'And yet I follow him'

    True it is the intense feeling in ones heart that makes one write; but it is also ones nature that helps develop this poetic skill.
    Your basics of viewing life are very strong come what may.

    Congrats.
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  • (12/3/2009 7:48:00 AM)


    Has an intense under story to it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 3, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 29, 2011


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