Am In............... Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Am In...............

Rating: 4.6

Life is on high hope
As to walk on tight rope
Some time on high some times on slope
You never stop never stop never stop

You may have to wait
But it won't be late
It won't be luck or fate
It is simple blank slate

Inscribe on it
Let light dimly lit
Feel warmth and not the heat
Fragrance may be very sweet

Go and pray
Have little say
Find the way
Look at the shining ray

I will wait till you come
Embrace with full welcome
Nothing will slip away but only stay
Spring is in offing and not away

Chand Shikari 14 July 2010

Life is on high hope As to walk on tight rope.. life is big hope for all....10

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Pradyumna Jyotir 15 March 2010

This is such an optimistic poem...hopeful on every note...exhorting others to go forward. Moving forward.... Alive...alert.... Nothing will tempt you to divert... From doing what you wish to do.. The forward route is the route for you..... Just keep moving forward and keep penning wonderful lines.

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Sahar Sahar 15 March 2010

life in energetic with troughs and crests, we need only hope to survive even we get with disability standing before us as a steep hill

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Leonard Dabydeen 14 March 2010

I find a strong sense of hope in each stanza. The rhyme has an almost bitter-sweet rhythm towards the end. Enjoy this poem. Blessings. Leonard

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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