Manonton Dalan

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Am Writing - Poem by Manonton Dalan

nose failing
eyes crying
head aching
sleep slipping
time passing
darkness ebbing

dream sprouting
heart beating
blanket warming
fingers fidgeting
mind rejoicing
you smiling

Comments about Am Writing by Manonton Dalan

  • Cynthia Buhain-baello (2/17/2013 8:55:00 PM)

    Creative write, it would be best to work on a premise and end with a resolution. Interesting and smooth flow. Better remove the rating box as some people use it inappropriately. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 10, 2013

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