##among Trees Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

##among Trees

Rating: 4.0


one would heal another
one would'nt stand there
to see the sick one droop and wither

they do it not for a fare
they converse... their pains they share
to heal one another

their whispers we do hear
their conversation we don't decipher
to know their plights..it is not clear

man doesnt heal...man slaughters
to hear his ears aren't sharp
to slaughter his axe he sharpens

[one tree healing or curing another tree is not an illusion it is a proven fact]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bonnie Collins 25 May 2009

A nice tribute to mother nature, and how true..... I am all for saving trees......

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Antonio Liao 25 May 2009

a whisper of a little tree, meant something to cure every memories we experienced....a mint to other sees no one than a touch of a tree.....you have something than what is the seen in your pen.... i felt it..thank you...God bless and may you have agood health...a 10+++++++

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Subbaraman N V 25 May 2009

Great observation about one of the most important creations of the Almighty! Nice!

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David Child 25 May 2009

Hi This is a heavy poem; Is is just about mutual support..? 'one would heal another one would'nt stand there to see the sick one droop and wither'

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Sathyanarayana M V S 25 May 2009

The last line is the soul of the poem. Trees give us everything they have. But we torture them, kill them for our selfish purposes. Good thought. Well written

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Mubeen Sadhika 26 September 2009

Sensitive portrayal. Nicely penned. deserves 10++++++

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Pandian Angelina 03 July 2009

An unthought of view An unheard of piece of wisdom As always you open Skylights in my mind! Thanks for letting in The rays of Gyana's Sun In to enlighten our souls and lives! Angel

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man doesnt heal...man slaughters to hear his ears aren't sharp to slaughter his axe he sharpens.......what live and lovely imagination abt life n nonlife object..... we stand to extinct the things where as they stand for togetherness//... lovely poemwith pure and scred thiughts.......reagrds

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a vivid poem well written...10++++

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Vaibhav Pandey 03 June 2009

this is a very good poem sam...lot to learn from this..10

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