An Answer To A Window Gazer Poem by Denis Mair

An Answer To A Window Gazer

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After noticing signs of a habit put aside
I posed a question to myself—a window gazer
The question stayed in my rough-draft notebook
A year or two later, I wrote it as a poem
My daughter who is favored by the muses
And is the best reader a father could ask for
Read my "Question for a Window Gazer"
Then she looked up in surprise and said,
"Dad, I heard a conversation in a coffee shop
I think it had something to do with your poem! "
One day my daughter sat in that independent café
Once mentioned in the New York Times
As one of those "third places" in our city
A space for neighborhood and community
And rival to the sign of the "Green Mermaid®"
Two ladies met and sat at the neighboring table
One removed a cap, let down her long chestnut curls
Looked straight at her friend and spoke for a long time:
"Thank you for meeting me here, this is a sad day
In a few minutes I'll go to my husband's shop nearby
Today I will begin my first course of chemotherapy
He wants to be the one to cut my hair
He doesn't want to see it fall out in patches."
My daughter did not eavesdrop on purpose
But this story was delivered to her sympathetic ear
It tells me how someone's dream was interrupted
We hold onto dreams by filaments as fine as hairs
When it comes time for wielding scissor blades
May we never turn them against anyone else
May we take care of our own

Sunday, September 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: observation,surprise,daughter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is the sequel to QUESTION FOR A WINDOW GAZER. It records something that my daughter actually heard.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laurie Van Der Hart 29 September 2019

Denis, this is totally fascinating and well told. I love how you describe your daughter, the lady with the chestnut curls, the conversations. Your daughter is evidently as observant and interested in other people as you are. The coincidence is quite astonishing. I find your conclusion about the scissors very skillful and unexpected. An excellent poem.

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Bharati Nayak 08 September 2019

But this story was delivered to her sympathetic ear It tells me how someone's dream was interrupted We hold onto dreams by filaments as fine as hairs When it comes time for wielding scissor blades May we never turn them against anyone else May we take care of our own - - -A fine poem based on keen observation and sensitive portrayal through a sympathetic heart.

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