I see a pilgrimage route through the red-dust realm
a sunset over the sphere of desire turning murky;
a lake of fire choking in metabolic by-products;
the vituperative sludge of late petroleum;
Stravinsky's Firebird beslimed in a tar pit;
shades in the settling lagoon at a nuclear waste site;
the pride of iron undone by weak acid and salt;
the end stage of a marsh that was a natural kidney;
O passion that could not cleanse itself;
O world full of slaughtered enchantments,
even now groping towards infernal re-enchantment!
A great poem inspired by David Mann's painting....'the pride of iron undone by weak acid and salt; the end stage of a marsh that was a natural kidney; O passion that could not cleanse itself; '
it's superb description of the picture; great enjoyeb poetic expression
O passion that could not cleanse itself; O world full of slaughtered enchantments, always groping towards infernal re-enchantment! Nice, influencing and pure poetry.
P2 to stretch toward an infinity of possibilities unbothered by metabolic nuclear waste sludge as firebird is birth born unblemished from choking lake of fire
I wrote the poems 'In Sea Incarnadined: Eternity Stretches Toward Infinity' and 'Chopper Motorcycles Ridden Into Surrealism', inspired by the poem 'The Sea Incarnadined', by the poet Denis Mair and dedicated to Denis Mair.
P1 in the world of imaginative approaching exploring a Sea Incarnadined in pinkish flesh out beyond red-dust realm where pride of iron undone by weak acid and salt etched time; eternity is free
I wrote the poem 'Wasteland Begs Firebird Phoenix Arise', inspired by the poem 'The Sea Incarnadined', by the poet Denis Mair and dedicated to Denis Mair.
A wonderfully expressive poem! ! With its marvelous imagery, it is beautiful companion to the painting by David Mann.
O world full of slaughtered enchantments, always groping towards infernal re-enchantment! ---that is Mair magic--Would that I could cast a spell with poetry as you do---top marks of course
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice poem. I learnt a new word today, incarnadined. Thanks. Voted 5.