Friday, April 22, 2011

An Apology

Rating: 4.7
</>I don't know how.... I don't know why
I can't believe how.. how dared I?
Because of my madness.. I now cry and cry
Your character impressed me... so how can I?
forget your pretty.. pretty eye
if you won't forgive me.. I'll die
I'm now so regretful.. so so shy
I don't know how.... I don know why
I can't believe how.. how dared I?
Because of my madness.. i'm now cry and cry.
Abdallah Gamal
Topic(s) of this poem: apology
Heather Wilkins 21 June 2013
with an apology like this one you will be forgiven I'm sure. very sweet and touching.
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Amanda Yates 07 September 2012
That's lovely. I'm sure no one could reject an apology like that.
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Aditi Khandelwal 28 May 2012
Awww this is really cute! ! Who wont forgive if the apology is so sweet! Aditi
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Shamin Shah 04 August 2011
Way to go Abdallah...this is so so cute poem... the start of your poem really caught my attention....very creative... loved it
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u r really good at writing so far of wat i have read some of it is better then my own
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Sa'milleah Toatley 25 July 2011
it is jus what it say......cute. u right very well for 16
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Abhijit Roy 17 July 2011
Very nice and true to the name.. it IS cute. One can add a tune to it to make it sing like a pop song. Good Work.
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Ahmed Abomahfouz 05 June 2011
great job Abdallah i can't believe you are 16 and talented this way, you express hard emotions and although you are 16 but seems to have great life experience
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Romeo Della Valle 01 May 2011
An excellent and well crafted write! 10+++ Definitely, you got what it takes to inspire the whole World, talent! Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! ...
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Tami Alshamsi 01 May 2011
nice poem, good work
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