Abdallah Gamal

Rookie - 345 Points (8/June/1995 / Egypt)

Don'T Pretend Being Happy Just Smile - Poem by Abdallah Gamal

sometimes you look to other people and see them happy,
while you're stuck in many troubles, asking yourself 'why am I so gloomy? '

You see this girl talking about her new dress, and that boy shining with his girlfriend,
while you're staring, talking to yourself, neither an enemy nor a friend.

Then you go back home to find troubles and fights,
you get into your room and remind back your diary as every night,
lying on the bed, the stars are dancing, staring to the moon's bright,
listening to the voice of nature, flying in the sky like a free kite.
Then the sky rains heavily, a moment later comes the rainbow light.
I was also like you wondering the seven colors except the white.

I asked my dad where is the white? ! He smiled at me and replied,
'This is life son, to take a photo for happy people someone has to take aside.'

Topic(s) of this poem: life


Comments about Don'T Pretend Being Happy Just Smile by Abdallah Gamal

  • Patricia Grantham (11/9/2013 3:59:00 PM)

    Sometimes people put a mask on so that you don't see their real faces.
    Deep inside they could be experiencing something painful. Happiness
    depends on what you have or the feeling for the moment. True joy comes
    from deep within. Keep in smiling anyhow! Lovely.
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  • (4/29/2012 8:17:00 PM)

    Pretty, 'life is a group of colours so be patient'. Yes I like it, things will get better if only you wait. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/11/2011 1:18:00 AM)

    The sweep of imagination as also presentation are very nice. I like the poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Clarence Prince (11/8/2011 8:48:00 AM)

    A nice job! Well done! (Report)Reply

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  • (11/4/2011 1:30:00 PM)

    i like this poem.. it has a good amount of imagery. :) its a great poem (Report)Reply

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  • (11/3/2011 8:21:00 PM)

    i liked this poem. it made me think about the future and how no matter how bad it seems now, there is always tomorrow. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/18/2011 1:09:00 PM)

    Yet another beautiful poem! It words are so true. It tells about how life can be so harsh, yet there is always good somewhere. I think everyone has felt like this sometime before, and you put it into words flawlessly and beautifully (: I also love how it (Report)Reply

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  • (9/16/2011 9:39:00 PM)

    I loved it <3 <3 <3 beautiful and very very true (Report)Reply

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  • Mohammed Al-balushi (9/16/2011 12:38:00 PM)

    yes we should be happy n keep smiling, thanks 4 sharing (Report)Reply

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  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/16/2011 2:14:00 AM)

    Way too good..well done (Report)Reply

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  • Leonard Dabydeen (9/15/2011 11:09:00 PM)

    Gift yourself a smile...as the song says...'don't worry, be happy'. Smile with everyone, even if your mind is troubled. It costs you nothing. A good write. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/15/2011 7:26:00 AM)

    nicely written you really have a talent in writing poems.
    so glad to take my time to read it
    it was worth all the time that was needed
    keep it up your doing great! !
    your friend Bella
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  • (9/13/2011 7:32:00 PM)

    i love it its very good (Report)Reply

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  • Abdallah Gamal (9/11/2011 9:10:00 AM)

    Thx Raven a lot :) and yeah It's a personal poem, about me, but of course the last stanza didn't happen :) (Report)Reply

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  • (9/9/2011 10:31:00 AM)

    i like this poem alot.. is it about you or is it just something you wrote... anyways i just love it. (Report)Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (9/9/2011 9:39:00 AM)

    The Smile just precious weapon to use...Like this poem very much it really has a brightening soul sensation, you end it very well and sharp..i like the last stanza, it such a beautiful write :) _Unwritten Soul (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 9, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 14, 2014


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