An Eternal Dream Poem by Amitava Sur

An Eternal Dream

Rating: 5.0


A warm embrace with comfort galore
Feeling angels being around me.
I am also floating freely -
In a star studded moonlit night.

No bindings, no repentance
No pressure of commitments,
A free mind with freedom inside
Is in the quest of ultimate peace.

In the abundance of the endlessness
Roaming in that vast galore,
No desire no love or lust
Only enjoying, loving the soul.

No beginning with no end
An eternal enlightenment.
Fervently endeavoring
To awaken the inner self.
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Amitava(26.6.2014)



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Sunday, June 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 30 June 2014

A state of weightlessness...... a heightened moment of self realization..... A journey into infinity......! Amitava.... you have described a celestial experience with great feel! Enjoyed much!

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 June 2014

Beautiful poem on eternal enlightenment...It brings positivity to ones life. It changes ones thoughts. Very true said, , , , , A free mind with freedom inside Is in the quest of ultimate peace..... Our main aim is peace in life. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Roseann Shawiak 04 January 2015

An amazing poem, Amitava! I especially love the last verse, you have brilliantly expressed your interior life and it's quest for ultimate peace! Another perfect 10, Amitava! ! Your rhythm and flow of words is intense and captured my mind from beginning to end! No pressures from the outside world, only an illuminating enlightenment. Really well written poem! Can feel your mind's freedom searching for inner peace. Thank you, Amitava, a beautiful poem indeed! RoseAnn

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Akhtar Jawad 11 July 2014

No beginning with no end An eternal enlightenment. Fervently endeavoring To awaken the inner self. It is a peace providing belief that makes death a little pleasant. I am also with you in this belief.

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* Sunprincess * 08 July 2014

............somehow being in this state, I wonder if we will miss our bodies and will we retain our sense of self....enjoyed this beautiful poem...

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Md Elias Uddin 02 July 2014

No beginning with no end An eternal enlightenment. Fervently endeavoring To awaken the inner self. Nice to read you again!

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Savita Tyagi 01 July 2014

Lovely poem. Those moments when mind free from external pressures feels a sense of peace is truly a moment of eternal enlightenment.

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