Ramesh T A

Gold Star - 47,387 Points (28th August 1950 / Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India)

An Eternal War For Survival! - Poem by Ramesh T A

Caught between mosquitoes and ants life goes on
Like the ship tossed on the waves of ocean long!
Both ups and downs of life have their own tasks
To be negotiated with appropriate measures ever!

In the night we have to face air attacks incessantly
And in the day we have to deal with ground attacks
Like the army infantry does on the onward march
To complete the mission fixed as target to win the war!

Both for animals and men these attacks are common
And the survival of the fittest first has to deal with it
Along with the life works to be done without fail
In this world of beauty and beast survival for sure!

From the age of dinosaurs to the dogs of wars of men
These insects of nuisance and bacteria never leave all free!


Comments about An Eternal War For Survival! by Ramesh T A

  • Indira Renganathan (2/1/2010 3:16:00 AM)


    A wonderful poem on the painful boredom the insectarium stings us with...with excellent flavour of words....brilliant....thank you (Report) Reply

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  • Indira Renganathan (2/1/2010 3:13:00 AM)


    A wonderful poem on the painful boredom the insectarium stings us with...with excellent flavour of words....brilliant....thank you (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Martyres (2/1/2010 2:35:00 AM)


    An excellent write Ramesh..with brilliant opening lines..10+++
    Sorry I am unable to rate poems now...another PH problem
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  • (2/1/2010 2:08:00 AM)


    Ramesh, thought your second stanza was brilliant. A well thought out piece of writting.10/10
    Regards,
    Ian
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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 1, 2010



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