For the first time in many days
I decided to bestow myself a gift
Of long and lonely stroll in the
Neighbouring park
I felt drawn into the cycle of
A huge rotating apparatus
As soon as I joined the obligatory walk
Of self absorbed localites
The cool evening fresh with
First sprinkle of monsoon
Imitated a perfect soggy dawn
A bunch of unknown pink flowers
Cuddled closely and stay put in their
Bush, like a group of gossiping girls.
Noise from overjoyed children
Made me glance with concern
As their screams tugged my motherly impulse
Rows of seated elderly pair
Looked alike my aged parents,
I walked past them watching affectionately.
Every ingredient was present to
Make my evening, which I enjoyed
Nonetheless and exited the little park
Pretending that only your thought never
Came to my mind...no not even once...........!
in a hot and hazy june mid day....you put the sprinkler on....touched the heart and tender cord...almost took me along vivid...beautiful cheers
a lovely picture of the park you give there...so much of life in it....10
A simple and casual Evening Walk unravels a vivid and pleasant world of life and delight! Best wishes.
Evening walk at a pleasant atmosphere... flowers.. colours.. memories of parents... Seema your intention to hide your inner feelings is great.. at the end you said it... pretending your thoughts never came to my mind... ever? ? ? ? ? ? ... seema dear, another 10+++++ -Jaleel Perinjanam
such a beautiful write seems............thanks for the walk in the park.....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
versification of the little park within!