simran arora

Rookie (22-july-1996 / gurgon)

An Incoherent Relation! - Poem by simran arora

An incoherent relation,
Can be mending,
Only when we show some helping hand,
But in reality it starts including insecurity,
And some confusions that also pity,
They start poking one by one,
And that also not for fun,
This made both mainstays,
Donating every happiness,
With a tempo so high,
Fighting of emotions,
But affect only one,
And other start again its life with fun,
But for the other life become the worst creature,
And then wants to destroy them from nation,
But suicide is not the solution,
I think solution is a new passion,
Changing your life style,
Starting imagine one new heaven for your self,
But this time she will do it without anyone’s help,
Here the person would know the real status of life,
And this is better then being a wife,
Wife is being a job for free,
But it could not no longer then 33,
Designing your life in your desire,
Will take you higher and higher,
It is the biggest challenge to be admired by other,
And for that you have cross a lit of hurdles,
Leaving a spot on life with a lesson,
Be like a knife with a new passion,
No one dares to hurt you,
As your spirit will make every one with you as you grow,
And promise you will respect your life which is new,
For beautiful changes in your life,
Just try to go through…….

Comments about An Incoherent Relation! by simran arora

  • (1/14/2012 2:35:00 PM)

    Designing your life in your desire,
    Will take you higher and higher,
    Motivating poem,
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  • (1/3/2012 2:36:00 PM)

    a nicely written one. ya u r right about the new passion. (Report) Reply

  • (10/14/2011 7:07:00 PM)

    it great keep it up, as you write you are been inspired (Report) Reply

  • (10/14/2011 6:53:00 PM)

    you have an idea to share but try and give your poem meaning and stanza (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 1, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 8, 2011

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