Luck.... Poem by simran arora

Luck....

Rating: 3.5


I stud aside the hills,
feearing and scaring,
loving and dareing,
gromed and graced me,
for good and the best at every street,
tearin my nights,
burning my days,
with wonders for prases,
and longer to stay,
not i am climbing,
on its roots and hills...
Stand and stuckd,
bt now peopl call it luck....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 26 July 2013

I can realise your emotional write. but please do not use abbreviation in poetry this is my opinion. keep writing.

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Julius Lenjatin 13 July 2013

good poem, good flow, but you can even do better. just check on some few spelling mistakes otherwise nice work

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Hazel Durham 11 July 2013

Good write you need luck on your side in this life!

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Subodh Pandey 10 July 2013

lovely write thanks for share

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Jenie Franksay 09 July 2013

gud rhythm. keep it up.. check out my new poem 'why be the next' dnt forget to give ur valueable comment.

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