An Innocent Village Girl Poem by Sam Varghis

An Innocent Village Girl

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You are a grown up girl!
But, still, an innocent kid in spirit
A damsel like a full-blown blossom
A luxurious dream of men of land

You are a work of art; of God, the sculptor
Beautifully carved body structure
Never ever so gorgeous in body and soul,
None, born except you or, ever lived in our soil

Your smile sprout like gloss of jasmine blooms;
Like the mellow rays of a spring daybreak.
Eyes are passionate, mysterious, and deep
Elegant hair so long and fingers lovely

You are a stream, oozing out of true virtues
Lushly; but drive to batter rocks and roots wild
Abruptly; but, whirling and laughing flow forth
Amidst of rude awakenings and furors

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 11 September 2011

Good poem keep it up. Lets see some more. May i invite you to read my poem Called, the beast.

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Dave Walker 11 September 2011

Good poem keep it up. Lets see some more. May i invite you to read my poem Called, the beast.

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Abdallah Gamal 11 September 2011

Very beautiful poem, the ink u used is never fade of its beautiful colors :) I liked this stanza 'Your smile sprout like gloss of jasmine blooms; Like the mellow rays of a spring daybreak. Eyes are passionate, mysterious, and deep Elegant hair so long and fingers lovely ' very beautiful really :)

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Ramesh Rai 10 April 2012

I agree with Stefanie, but who is this innocent village girl.

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Stefanie Fontker 17 September 2011

This is a very sweet poem, you have captured her well here.

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Allemagne Roßmann 16 September 2011

Very vivid and ecstatic write on a beauty escapade

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isabella Francis 16 September 2011

It isn't a poem.... It's a picture.. You could almost see the girl in front of your eyes.. Really nice.

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Saadat Tahir 13 September 2011

very nice and charming...a bit mirror mirror on the wall...lolzzz...but dats poetic licence....! loved it.... :) be happy sat

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Kannur, Kerala, India
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