An Ordinary Woman Poem by Akhtar Jawad

An Ordinary Woman

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With too many hopes you go to a beauty parlor,
A makeup artist and a costly truthful mirror,
The mirror makes you restless and puts in fears.
What's written in your fate smiles or tears.
Shall anyone look at you and admire,
Or ignore you to be burnt in a fire,
In a gathering of beautiful faces,
Who will find out your inner graces,
Why don't you try the waiting eyes,
At a lonely place below the open skies.
Why don't you try one who loves you,
Knows your inner beauty and deserves you,
The eyes of a lover with a heart that is lonely,
Look into his eyes, yours wholly and solely.
A beautiful heart, you are not an ordinary woman,
An extra ordinary woman deserves a lovely man.

Saturday, September 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: true
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 June 2020

Revisiting this beautiful poem . A must read for women. Very inspiring.

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Anjandev Roy 17 November 2019

inner graces/ inner beauty.......lovely. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 September 2019

Wow, what a beautiful poem, Sir Akhtar. Yes, an ordinary woman will become extraordinary in the eyes of a true lover. A beautifully crafted write with a meaningful message. Onto my Poem List.

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