And I Keep My Fingers Crossed. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

And I Keep My Fingers Crossed.

Rating: 5.0


As the thoughts fell word by words from imagination,
On the rocky heart, it started to melt,
Like dewdrop on the rose petal.
The fragrance of love spread quickly,
like the moonbeam on the dunes of sand,
And started to rise like the morning sun.

The lifeless ideas started to crawl,
Like a caterpillar ready to become a butterfly.
On the endless bending of the sky,
My thoughts reached the cosmic shores,
And started to plummet drop by drop,
Like the spring from the ocean of emotions.

When I try to see from the prism of this life,
The poetry I wrote in the endless sky,
My vision returns with an emptiness.
The clouds that have covered the moon and the stars,
Will they ever appear in the sky again?
Another day to pass another night to wait,
And I keep my fingers crossed.

Thursday, June 10, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zoyza Da Vinka 10 June 2021

Poetry writing is a difficult art and not all succeed. I am sure your poems are so appealing that some day you will get recognition. A wonderful poem keeping the hope alive.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 10 June 2021

All Stars

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Darren Jkoeryo 11 June 2021

Articulate poem. Artistic work with words.

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Michael 11 June 2021

Bravo

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 June 2021

Yr words are golden to my ears Bravo!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 June 2021

Poetry at its best! Superb imagery. To my Poem List.

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Varsha M 10 June 2021

Sir sometimes waiting is good. Like when waiting for rain but sometimes waiting is not good like if someone is sick procrastinating will only spoil the health.. so, waiting needs critical analysis.

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