And Our Lovable Moon Poem by Thampi KEE

And Our Lovable Moon

Rating: 5.0


Then the shadow of moon and then I was scared to go
Where ever spirit of moon winged in our eyes
Beneath the shadow of songs you sing to me and the skies
tell the secrets of nature

I was welcomed by you
But drank the bitter tears you made on this rain
But the dark and muddy night tell nothing to us
My thoughts did break for for this nature to come with us

Then I feel you're drowning, air becomes a pillow
And there is no more reason to find it again

Monday, February 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salini Nair 03 February 2015

Then I feel you're drowning, air becomes a pillow And there is no more reason to find it again....................beautiful

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Akhtar Jawad 15 February 2015

A beautiful description in a sweet poetic style..........................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 February 2015

Very nicely envisioned. Deep timagination. Beautiful poem. Many thanks.

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Amitava Sur 30 April 2015

A lovely imagery was drawn on the back drop of lovable moon clubbed with both joy and pain.

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 April 2015

A Beautiful poem on our lovable moon, which is offering us both pain and joy together. Beautiful flow of words. Loved reading it.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 30 March 2015

There is great beauty in your words. Enjoyed.

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Valsa George 17 March 2015

Great imagination! Enjoyed your poem on love and pain! Love gives us joy, but always tainted by pain!

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Rene Bennett 07 March 2015

Hello my fellow poet. Long time! Thought I'd drop by and read a poem or two. Love the metaphor you use here! Feels great to read you again!

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