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And Reach The Heaven!

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I walk amidst the moving cloud(s)
Seek its message that make it proud
Share with the world all around
Spread that joy and peace moving around!

Weak clouds shadow the mighty Sun
Seem to the children as pretty fun
Weak is not weak, timid not timid
If efforts are made to change and change vivid
In the dog days of sunny summer

Thunder and lightning trumpet as a drummer
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Duy Bui 04 April 2008

Would you have any suggestions of an Indian poet I should look into? Please let me know. Thanks! My email is duynh@yahoo.com

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Gita Ashok 25 June 2010

Weak clouds shadow the mighty Sun Seem to the children as pretty fun Weak is not weak, timid not timid If efforts are made to change and change vivid In the dog days of sunny summer Thunder and lightning trumpet as a drummer Visit of clouds that bring breeze and shower Relieve the earth of heat with power! You have used such beauiful imagery in this poem. Reading it felt like meditation. My mind felt at peace after I finished reading te entire poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2009

Up, up, up in the sky Soar, soar, soar so high Over the hills and trees with joy and ease And reach the Heaven with Divine grace! ...it is always lovely to share the views with your brilliant thoughts....10 read mine making sense.... still breathing

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 09 May 2009

fly us with your shining words to Seventh Heaven, brother! very gorgeous! !

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Chitra - 15 December 2008

ethereal verses filled with celestial wonder.

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Kesav Easwaran 14 June 2008

a poem soaring with heavenly bliss...

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