Subbaraman N V

Freshman - 864 Points (31st July 1941 / Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India)

And Reach The Heaven! - Poem by Subbaraman N V

I walk amidst the moving cloud(s)
Seek its message that make it proud
Share with the world all around
Spread that joy and peace moving around!

Weak clouds shadow the mighty Sun
Seem to the children as pretty fun
Weak is not weak, timid not timid
If efforts are made to change and change vivid
In the dog days of sunny summer
Thunder and lightning trumpet as a drummer
Visit of clouds that bring breeze and shower
Relieve the earth of heat with power!

Gliding through the clouds that are cool
Feeling light like a bundle of wool
Flying fast without a pair of wings
Divine experience of the bird that sings!

Up, up, up in the sky
Soar, soar, soar so high
Over the hills and trees with joy and ease
And reach the Heaven with Divine grace!


Comments about And Reach The Heaven! by Subbaraman N V

  • Gita Ashok (6/25/2010 2:42:00 AM)


    Weak clouds shadow the mighty Sun
    Seem to the children as pretty fun
    Weak is not weak, timid not timid
    If efforts are made to change and change vivid
    In the dog days of sunny summer
    Thunder and lightning trumpet as a drummer
    Visit of clouds that bring breeze and shower
    Relieve the earth of heat with power!

    You have used such beauiful imagery in this poem. Reading it felt like meditation. My mind felt at peace after I finished reading te entire poem.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/5/2009 6:33:00 PM)


    Up, up, up in the sky
    Soar, soar, soar so high
    Over the hills and trees with joy and ease
    And reach the Heaven with Divine grace! ...it is always lovely to share the views with your brilliant thoughts....10

    read mine making sense.... still breathing
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  • Ahmad Shiddiqi (5/9/2009 7:55:00 PM)


    fly us with your shining words to Seventh Heaven, brother! very gorgeous! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/15/2008 10:19:00 AM)


    ethereal verses filled with celestial wonder. (Report) Reply

  • (6/14/2008 12:19:00 PM)


    a poem soaring with heavenly bliss... (Report) Reply

  • (4/4/2008 11:47:00 AM)


    Would you have any suggestions of an Indian poet I should look into? Please let me know. Thanks! My email is
    duynh@yahoo.com
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 7, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 23, 2011


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