Tia Maria

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And Then You Judge My Soul - Poem by Tia Maria

I was doing just fine here on my own
and then you just had to phone
Don't ask me what I am doing
and then criticise what I'm pursuing

You may not have seen me there today
but when did I say I was coming anyway
He knows my thoughts and my heart
and we are not so very far apart


Comments about And Then You Judge My Soul by Tia Maria

  • (3/18/2009 12:10:00 PM)

    Some are so quick to judge. Wear a mental raincoat around those and like the rain, let it wash right off without touching you. :) Thank you for sharing. You have a way with making the mundane beautiful with your depictions of life. (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (10/4/2008 12:31:00 PM)

    A very nice poem.
    10+
    Love it.
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  • David Threadgold (9/27/2008 9:42:00 AM)

    Hi Tia. That damn phone always rings when you can do without it. well written Regards Dave T (Report)Reply

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  • Ershad Mazumder (9/16/2008 9:25:00 AM)

    Very good piece. Live in your soul to enjoy your time.Body is full of greed and lust.body is destined to dust while soul is eternity. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/14/2008 4:37:00 PM)

    this packs a nice punch, and still remains elegant...it makes me think 'you tell em! '...great work (Report)Reply

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  • (9/14/2008 4:33:00 AM)

    This is a sad one... Tia.. Andy (live your own life don't let others tell you what to do) (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 14, 2008



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