As I walked home
with you tonight
Just like my heart
The moon was bright.
The stars like ours
were twinkling eyes
A match made in heaven,
Oh sweet surprise... :)
Hi Tia. You cant beat the short ones direct and to the point yet saying so much, Really well done **10** Regards Dave T.
Short sweet and really nice. The flow was excellent and the emotion of happiness was abundant. It has always amazed me how in so few words a picture can be volumes. Like Haiku's which I enjoy a lot. Few words but if written right wonderful.Great job
Lucky lady :) Again, a beautifully written poem with vivid images that make the knees weak. Well done my friend. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sounds like a Heavenly walk... Andy 10