Uninvited thoughts, corrupt a verse
And poetry, you become a curse
Memory, you can be so unkind
Your constant ability, to remind
And radio, sometimes you don't belong
You are so cruel, it's very wrong
I decided to move on, today
But then that song, you had to play
And as for you, lousy weather
I suppose you think, you very clever
You knew my plan, to have some fun
But took away my friend, the sun
But like this season
Emotions are strange
Without any given reason
it will all just change
And Spring will surprise
and brighten away
All those unwanted thoughts
of a grey yesterday
And life will simply just, carry on
and take us to wherever we, belong
There may be a few clouds, along the way
But they will make way, for a brand new day
Forward thinking in this piece of magic, yes a good write your future holds so much for you with this frame of mind, smiles ahead of yourself 10 Chris
Now this was a cheerful and delightful poem, great read! Loyd
Marvelous poem. Last stanza is amazing. A moving composition with magnificent metaphors,10 for it.
Tia Maria Is that your real name? It is like your poem, it flows and it rhymes! ! ! ! ! ! Very nice
Bursting with beauty. Thanks for making my day.
Your poem is fresh and natural. I know and have lived this poem. You have a fan here in California. Good day to you Raymond
There may be a few clouds, along the way But they will make way, for a brand new day.........wonderful lines........Show must go on..........10+++
This poem opened my eyes, really liked it, im only young but i hope to develop as good as that
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Brialliant use of use to express emotions. One of my favorite poems I've read today. Love the use of rhyme and seasons. Lovely piece of work.10/10