And You................Are There! Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

And You................Are There!

Rating: 3.5


I am here.
And you................are there!
Isn't the air between us fresh?
Isn't it best,
Left that way?
Keeping it fresh.
And hoping it stays!
Doesn't it feel earned?
As if something like a lesson kept...
Has been taught and learned.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 18 February 2008

I know what you mean here Lawrence I have felt that feeling of self awarness, though usually it comes just after a break-up That being said this is very well written Tight and concise Love duncan X

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Original Unknown Girl 18 February 2008

Interesting thoughts here - like it! HG: -) xx

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