I am here.
And you................are there!
Isn't the air between us fresh?
Isn't it best,
Left that way?
Keeping it fresh.
And hoping it stays!
Doesn't it feel earned?
As if something like a lesson kept...
Has been taught and learned.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I know what you mean here Lawrence I have felt that feeling of self awarness, though usually it comes just after a break-up That being said this is very well written Tight and concise Love duncan X