VIPINS PUTHOORAN


Angel(2) - Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Today is the saddest day for you
And this night is dreadful too
Ha! I've found it in your eyes
Look and feel the waves of my heart
Forsake! the rippling of your pain
At the brink of my heart's den
You sleep well on my sapphire bosom
My heart is a prism made of love
Let the beam of my heart's moonlight,
Awake colourful dreams in your dark-night
Oh, my sweet angel sleep well
In the dreams of my heart for ever
Where no one will come to affright you.

Topic(s) of this poem: angel


Comments about Angel(2) by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

  • (10/23/2012 11:30:00 AM)

    a classical treat indeed. it's great...keep writing (Report)Reply

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  • Anjali Menon (1/17/2012 8:53:00 PM)

    woooow its really lovely.......your style of writing and the feel is really commendable.....keep writing more poems like this (Report)Reply

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  • (1/9/2012 1:59:00 PM)

    Hey, , will you be my valentine?
    Amazing.................................10******
    Rose.
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  • (1/8/2012 12:11:00 PM)

    What a delightful painting, colored with words. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/7/2012 3:44:00 PM)

    its lovely...................................................................................................................................... (Report)Reply

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  • Cristina Teodor (1/7/2012 1:38:00 AM)

    Great poem, i like the way how you play with metaphors creating a fantastiqc perception of human bond with the universe..Cristina Teodor (Report)Reply

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  • (1/5/2012 10:39:00 PM)

    Making nice images inside the consumer of your poems reflections is always one of your subspecialities in such an artistic splendid field you've got many of the best in and out, thank you alot leading me to your glowing paintings and vivid profound colours, my dear friend, allove, allgoodwishes (Report)Reply

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  • (1/5/2012 7:44:00 PM)

    beautiful poem, beautiful intent! (Report)Reply

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  • (1/5/2012 6:24:00 AM)

    good love poem... expressed from a good angle. it reads like Shakespare. keep it up! (Report)Reply

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  • (1/5/2012 4:32:00 AM)

    This is a very lovely piece. (Report)Reply

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  • Nicky Hill (1/4/2012 4:08:00 PM)

    lovely poem, reminds me of a good friend keep it up love reading your work :) (Report)Reply

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  • Elena Sandu (1/3/2012 7:31:00 AM)

    Lovely piece, colorful dreams in a dark night, I enjoy these poems, thank you for share,10 (Report)Reply

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  • Neetha Sasidharan (1/2/2012 10:19:00 AM)

    a nice sequel..
    pleasant poem..
    grt rhyming set..
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  • (1/2/2012 3:28:00 AM)

    A lovely poem. An angels peaceful sleep :) (Report)Reply

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  • Ramesh Rai (12/31/2011 10:47:00 PM)

    NICE POEM, WISH YOU A HAPPY NEW YEAR (Report)Reply

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  • Charles Jagongo Ogola (12/30/2011 5:16:00 AM)

    This a sweet poem. I like it. (Report)Reply

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  • Gina Albiek (12/29/2011 9:15:00 AM)

    It's realy nice i like it :) (Report)Reply

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  • (12/29/2011 3:55:00 AM)

    A nice write! Thanks for sharing, (Report)Reply

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  • Hans Vr (12/28/2011 6:07:00 AM)

    Really good poem. Reassuring your angel that she is safe with you. Very nicely written (Report)Reply

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  • Jacqui Broad (12/28/2011 5:30:00 AM)

    Oh Vipins... This is really true words of beauty. You are the angel, more likely, giving peace and calmness to people like me, even though you may not know... Top marks to you for writing such beautiful pieces. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 27, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 18, 2016


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