Anger Poem by tiffany fawcett

Anger

Rating: 4.5


Anger
I keep it all inside
I keep it close to my side
For If I lose it all
Heaven knows I'll die

I let it go
I breathe it in
It keeps coming back
For it is my sin

It's burned in me
It haunts me day & night
Carved into my core
It is my only sight

It's the only thing I know
It's all that is me
It's the only emotion I show
I wish I could be free

Anger

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Golding 11 March 2009

Very well expressed.

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Sharma Phuyal 20 March 2009

wow, beautiful sentences with lovely approach....... keep it up gal... u r gonna hit the big time

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Dakotas Angel 23 March 2009

thank you for the comment and you are very good your self keep it up

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%*-Young Song-*% 25 March 2009

That was very good, Tiffany. And don't say no one would care because that is not true. All you have to do is make yourself be known. Once again, that was very good, and thank you for the comment. I give you Kudos.

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Saadat Tahir 03 September 2009

well expressed the emotion...dark and foreboding yet ominously present every wheer...picked a topic and did justice to it well done cheers

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Barbara Sallee 18 June 2009

Tiffany, Thank you so much for your comment on my poem. this is my first day on this site and i am stil in the process of putting all of my poems on here. i just read you poem Anger and it is VERY VERY good, i will bookmark your site and certainly be back. Thank you again for your lovely comment. Barbie

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Wow, you must have a lot of strength to be able to keep your anger for so long. I tried that, but it was too much work. I'm sorry for whatevere made you so angry. Great poem!

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MuSiC HeaD 30 March 2009

i like this one even better than that other one

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Ibrar Siddiqi 27 March 2009

Hey Tifffany The poem defines me to the core - hidden away but dying to be released. Keep it up. Ibrar

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