Anger Comments

deep and profound in tone, Sir.

It is said, ' Anger is one lettIer away from danger.' A very nice poem portraying the consequences of anger.

A beautiful composition capturing the various hues and shapes of Anger. May we be able to conquer Anger with rightful thinking, meditation and compassion. Best wishes

Profoundly presented my friend.10/10

welcome to poem hunter. i enjoyed your poem. thanks for sharing it with all. hope u will read more of my poems too. take care

The last couple of lines - anger comes... Yes. if we can watch anger as it comes, we can keep him at a distance. If we identify with anger, then, we are lost. You have captured the reasons for anger nicely.

let not hunger of anger starve human feeling...if u feel angry look up 9/10

Anger, well defined with all its ramifications. Very poetic.

'Anger' is vividly described in your poem.I enjoyed the metsphors used to describe this very strong emotion.

Highly metaphorical....your longing observation is wellused...last three lines are really true to reality....well penned poem...thank you

Anger is the natural expression that not only human being…. An animal, plants, hills …. All know how to show? Expressed nicely…. :)

social aspect of Anger. so many atrocities that cause the bouts of anger. emotional write!

Your observations are put into visual imagery that conveys your emotion, esp. in the first stanza. The second stanza is more like a journalist's words than a poet's, and yet we need the specifics to know what you are angry about. Something that bridges the two, unifying it would make it stronger. The bus is in both stanzas, perhaps a few words or a line that would make the second stanza 'Views from a bus called anger' Just an idea, but you have a good eye for detail and an empathetic heart. Thank you for sharing.